I’ve been playing around with that one for a while and like it best. Then, after Madness Invisible there would be some sort of secondary title, something descriptive right there so the reader knows what he/she is going to be in for.
It’s 8:30pm. I’m ready to write now. I’m fully primed, like a runner warming up, waiting for that race to start.
The crowd bristles.
We begin.
